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Hi there!

Just saying hi.

And that I'm alive...sorta. 

But yeah, I'll likely vanish again.

~Kili
  • Mood: It's Hot
  • Listening to: Pier Narciss - Shokoladniy Zayac
  • Watching: Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun
Hey everyone, thanks for reading!

I'm aiming to self publish a book of shorts and I am just starting to process of re-writing the most recent drafts.
Is anyone interested in helping me out by editing once I'm done with each story?
Currently, I'm not sure how many it will be, but I have four stories that I will mash together. I think I will probably make it six stories in all, 3 fantasy, 3 science fiction. 

Any takers? I'll need all the help with edits/critique! I can get!!

Thanks!
~Kili
  • Mood: It's Hot
  • Listening to: Pier Narciss - Shokoladniy Zayac
  • Watching: Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun
This is something a bit different but I think it may actually be both fun and serve a good purpose. So here's the deal with it:
I'm going to put up the artwork I love the most from teh galleries of the first 15 people who will comment in this if they make a similar journal with me as top spot.
Stole this from :iconyournamehere8888:,
So I'm givin' him the top spot!! 
Woohoo!

1. yournamehere8888.deviantart.co… and yournamehere8888.deviantart.co…


**Oh yeah, and I'm alive. :D 
Just in case you were wondering.**
  • Mood: Hurt
Through The Looking Glass
Dance lessons

“CUT!” Director Akira yowled at the top of his lungs. There was a soft applauding from the crew and cast not on the film, signaling the scene had been filmed to the director’s liking. I shook myself slightly, spotting Shou standing frozen in the crowd of people. He flinched as our eyes met and swiftly turned away, vanishing out the doors in the back.
“That was well done, Miss Mogami!” Yashiro cheered as Ren and he wandered up to me, dodging past admiring fans within the crew and cast.
“The dance lesson will be held after this in about an hour. How about we go off and grab something to eat while they set up for it?” Ren suggested with mild cheer, although his eyes darted to the doors Shou had just left through. Although I would never admit it, I was glad to see the dislike Ren had for that bastard. Just thinking about it, I could feel little dark shadows swirling around me excitedly.
“Oooh, doesn’t that look nice?”
“A fight! A fight! We should set up a fight!”
“Oh ho ho ho! What an idea! A fight between Ren and-“
“Kyoko?”
I flinched at Ren’s voice and gave a shaking smile.
“Ah, sure… lunch would be great!” I sputter out, and Ren nods to Yashiro who chuckles merrily to himself and heads out ahead of us.
“Shall we go, then?”
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Yashiro had nabbed one of the conference rooms, and by the time we had reached it, he had pushed most of the chairs against the wall. Two bentos sat on one of the fold up tables that took up most of the room, and I glanced around in confusion.
“Well, it’s not much, but we don’t have much time.” Ren stated with a shrug, picking up one of the bentos and handing it to me.
“What’s going on?” I questioned, glancing at the overly cheerful Yashiro, but he yielded no hints.
“Do you have any ballroom dancing experience at all?” Ren questioned, opening the box that held his food and grabbing one of the pairs of chop sticks left on the table.
“Well…” I muttered hesitantly as he leaned against the nearest table and nibbled on some of the food.
“I thought so. Hurry and eat, I’ll show you the basics.” He chuckled and went back to his nibbling.


It was not long before I found myself being forced into Ren’s embrace. My entire body was trembling from being so near.
“Look up at me, Kyoko. In the dance scene, you must look at your partner. Alright, Yashiro, start the music!” Ren called. Yashiro tapped at Ren’s phone and I was blown away by the sound of beautiful classical music.
“We’ll take this slow. Place your arm here. Good, now take my hand. Ready?” Ren instructed. Clenching my teeth, I took his hand, my other hand wrapping tightly around his shoulders. I nearly had to stand on my tip toes to be able to reach. This was the first time I really realized how tall he is.
“Now step forward, like this. Simply follow my lead.” Ren grinned at me, forcing me to take a step back as he stepped forward. He threw several more instructions to me as we moved almost gracefully across the carpeted floor. As soon as I had gotten the general idea of how it worked, he began to count, giving a beat to follow, based off of the music as well as our movements. It wasn’t long until I was lost in a land of fairies, Ren transforming into my beloved Corn, his wings full and beautiful, fairies of all colors darting around, whispering and laughing, dancing with us, a unicorn in place of Yashiro. I could feel a grin of joy spreading across my face…
…Only to be ruined as the demon king burst through the fairy castle doors.
Shou yanked me backward, out of Ren’s grip, who had been too startled to react for a moment.
“Taking advantage, huh? Is this how you play the few women I don’t steal from you?” Shou sneered at Ren above my sputtering cry of shock. Ren’s face darkened, his eyes falling to Shou’s hand, where he was gripping my wrist hard enough to bruise.
“Let her go.”
“Ha! Or what?”
For a moment, Ren did not reply, but when he lifted his eyes, I cowered away from him, desperately trying to yank free of Shou simply to get away from the darkness surrounding Ren.
“Do you really want to find out?”
Hi there!

Just saying hi.

And that I'm alive...sorta. 

But yeah, I'll likely vanish again.

~Kili
  • Mood: It's Hot
  • Listening to: Pier Narciss - Shokoladniy Zayac
  • Watching: Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun

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AkiliRose
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Well HI THAR!

Lit account: ailik.deviantart.com/

I am Akili Rose, famous author and writer. (I wish)
Haha, just kidding.
As you might, possibly have noticed, I'm a writer, although this place is spammed with art. Well, I have several other places for my writings, so if you are interested, I can post some of my stuff from there here as well.
A bit about me.
Let's see.
I am pretty hyper, overemotional, I have an overactive imagination, I am accepting of a lot of people as long as you are accepting of me, I can often get annoying, I love to give out hugs in both real life and here, however in real life I do not like being hugged :/ (though I have no issue with it online :P), I role play almost all kinds of genres, and I'm always willing to try new things(roleplay wise) I will take art or writing requests, but I will not write your story for you, I am not too much of a fan of fan fictions for other books-usually mine are for anime, manga, art, music, ect-I watch anime and read manga, I am in love with love(aka I'm a romantic), all my stories have some sort of romance in them. Let's see, what else can I think of? I adore and form of art created just for me (ask my friends, I don't shut up about it for WEEKS) whether it be fan art or requests, or even simple gifts, I enjoy giving more than receiving, I can be a bitch, so please excuse me, I'm not the brightest light on the lamp (but I'm not dimwit either) and...that's all I can think of for now.
Oh, yes. Other websites I am on:
Youtube; Nowhereelsetogo
Facebook; N/a
Myyearbook; n/a
wolfhome/mystic realms; AkiliRose
Wajas; AkiliRose/AkiliRose~Sales~
Iscrible; Ilica, but you will find my temoray username is usually Mistakes
Maple Story;n/a (I have several characters)
Runescape; Nalawolf
Skye;n/a


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:iconjesuka:
Jesuka Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Happy birthday my lord!
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AkiliRose Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*Archie glances at you and gives a shrug* Where's my present?

On another note:
*Akili gives Jesuka a big hug!* Thank you!! :D
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Jesuka Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
<3 

*gives archie a Nazi Belt Buckle Pistol*

*hugs Akili back* you're welcome!
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AkiliRose Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*Archie grins evilly and gleefuly takes the pistol and runs off into the sun set with it. After a few moments, distant gunshots, screams, and whooping can be heard.*

:'D
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Pandasaurus-RAWR Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
Thanks for the watch ;v;
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AkiliRose Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh it's my pleasure!! I'm in love with your art x3
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the watch :)
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AkiliRose Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Of course!! Your are is fantastic!! Thanks for the comment!! x3
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thanks again, I'm honoured you think so! :D
And no problems at all^^
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writermartin42 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks for the watch
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